I am a monster


*spoken*
sitting in the dark and regret
every moment we spent i can't forget
that you took my heart and tortured so
that i am

*sang softly*

i am a monster
a twisted little freak
i am a mutant
left incomplete
i am deformed
by your deceit

*spoken*
Looking at the bright computer screen
Listening to the lyrics heard a million times before
through my broken ears as fall down to the floor
as i hear your voice again i tell myself
i am...

*sang softly*

I am a monster
a twisted little freak
i am a mutant
left incomplete
i am malformed
and you are to blame

*spoken*
and now ill never be the same
your torture has changed me
i am no longer man or beast
i am something lesser
a weaker
a poorer
i am a monster, nothing more
nothing less

*Yelled*
My jaw ripped out
cry out for help!
fight the hell of!

By the time I got to the end of the song I was crying tears of blood into the shape of the virgin Mary and was holding a small knife dangerously close to my wrists...

Kay, I like it, but that jaw ripping part wasn't necessary IMHO. Try to reduce such stuff

^its screamed by the guitarist on stage. idk why he did it but he did. It was kinda sick what he did though. he just kinda grabbed his mike, and screamed it into the mic. it was awesome!