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ZombiePrincess
Cerberus
Posts: 287
Join date: 2009-10-07
Age: 17
Location: The Corner
 | | Subject: My New Poem--- 'For You' Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:28 pm | |
| Please tell me what you think!
For You
I have given you my heart.
You've had it the past few years.
And it is for only you
that I've cried all these tears.
I want to tell you how I feel,
but I am just too weak.
And when I feel I have the courage,
it's like I forget how to speak.
Maybe one day you'll know the truth,
of what's going on in my mind.
Because, don't you see, your inner and outer beauty,
is truely one of a kind. |
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Mass Distraction
Uroboros
 Playstation Network: Mass Distraction
Posts: 5952
Join date: 2009-09-15
Age: 21
Location: Finland
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Fri Dec 18, 2009 11:10 am | |
| I liked it, that was sweet  I really like good poetry... |
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ghoroob f3
Raccoon Citizen
Playstation Network: AFN5-code
Posts: 88
Join date: 2009-11-18
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:57 pm | |
| wow,great.
although i hate the poetry but itis nice... |
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ZombiePrincess
Cerberus
Posts: 287
Join date: 2009-10-07
Age: 17
Location: The Corner
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Fri Dec 18, 2009 4:36 pm | |
| Thank you guys. It's not my best out of them but it was my latest one. |
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nekronuke
Umbrella Scientist
Posts: 878
Join date: 2009-07-12
Location: killing zombies with my trusty eraser
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:57 pm | |
| holy freakn crap i actually teared up a lil. damn your good. |
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ZombiePrincess
Cerberus
Posts: 287
Join date: 2009-10-07
Age: 17
Location: The Corner
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:52 pm | |
| Thank you! lol
I'm really mad right now though. My english teacher wanted me to put in a poem for our V-day newspaper so I did but she said it was too personal so I don't get to put it in there. It sucks! |
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frodomir
Tyrant T-002
Posts: 2640
Join date: 2008-10-18
Age: 21
Warning Level: 
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:10 pm | |
| Have u signed up to forums based on poetry and stuff like that? If people see your talent you might also start earning money. Love songs always seem to get sold. Its a good thing. Doing what you like and earning money from it. If you like it. If not. Still earn money  Yeah, I know. The date. I haven't been around for ages  |
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ZombiePrincess
Cerberus
Posts: 287
Join date: 2009-10-07
Age: 17
Location: The Corner
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:03 pm | |
| lol well welcome back!
and no i haven't. but i think i might check into that. even if i don't get published and stuff, it'd still be cool to share my poems and stuff. |
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frodomir
Tyrant T-002
Posts: 2640
Join date: 2008-10-18
Age: 21
Warning Level:
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:58 pm | |
| | ZombiePrincess wrote: | lol well welcome back!
and no i haven't. but i think i might check into that. even if i don't get published and stuff, it'd still be cool to share my poems and stuff. |
I hear ya. I know this girl. She wrote love poems and stuff and she actually got hired by towns library. She could have became something but she somehow ended up in goth and emo stories and now all she writes about is blood. Not many people like gory stuff. Ruins it yknow. Not that emo is bad, but ppl dont really like it, like whenever somebody says emo most ppl will think of crazy wannabes cutting themselves |
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nekronuke
Umbrella Scientist
Posts: 878
Join date: 2009-07-12
Location: killing zombies with my trusty eraser
| | Subject: Re: My New Poem--- 'For You' Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:41 pm | |
| I MISSED YOU FRO!!
and very nice, ms. Medlin
(may i send this to my girl? i'lll credit you!) |
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